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The Hawk's Eyes.
Contributed by
AndreyFisht
on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 12:09:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The proud hungry hawk
Was beyond above the world,
With a nature he could talk
And knew the perfect pure word.
He said that he was free before,
The woods were really wild,
He could hunting ever more,
Bringing food to his wild child.
He saw the vast valleys,
They were just a paradise,
The warm and mild rains
Made the grass to rise.
He saw the natures beauty,
The trees were close to sky,
But people building their future,
Made many trees to die.
Many animals are gone,
And he lives very hard,
The peoples era had become,
But nature,you were smart!
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AndreyFisht
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2010-02-03 12:09:34]
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Re: The Hawk's Eyes.
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 12:52:48 PM AEST
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Very nicely written.
Wouldn't it be a wonderful gift to see nature's beauty from above as he does
with such grace and poise? A lovely image I must say.
A very enjoyable read, thankyou x
Star x x x |
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Re: The Hawk's Eyes.
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by Sinned on
Friday, 12th February 2010 @ 05:18:55 AM AEST
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Very nicely done I could feel myself being that hawk circling above and seeing that man below is begining to understand his being a part of nature.
Our world is still a beautiful place. Beautiful write. |
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