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The World is Laughing...
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 07:45:33 PM in AEST
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The world is laughing;
tortured souls are drowning in tears.
I am crying.
The world is laughing;
invisible toxins contaminate the pure.
I am crying.
The world is laughing;
children are parenting themselves.
I am crying.
The world is laughing;
cries for help are heard with deaf ears.
I am crying.
The world is laughing;
my tears bleed their last drops.
Silence
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2010-02-02 19:45:33]
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Re: The World is Laughing...
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by Signalsovertheair on
Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 07:55:46 PM AEST
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You took me there.
I felt what you were conveying,
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Re: The World is Laughing...
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 11:03:34 PM AEST
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| repetition really worked in this created a strong sense of pain and melancholy well written |
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Re: The World is Laughing...
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 05:47:42 AM AEST
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The message came through really well
the way that you wrote this, well written
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: The World is Laughing...
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 10:53:50 PM AEST
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i can sense your excruciation here.
if people can't shed tears along with yours, then...
SCREW THE WORLD! :]
take care
-K.Z. |
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