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Phone
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
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Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 02:42:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There goes the phone ringing again.
Will someone please have a backbone.
And answer the phone.
I will but I am busy with the wishbone.
The phone smells like cologne.
Dont drop your icecream cone on the phone.
All this ringing from the phone is giving me a gallstone.
My hormones are getting up from the ringing of the phone.
Ring Ring Thats all the phone does.
Answer it.
Before I postpone the trip.
It that phone rings one more time.
My hormones are going to fly.
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2010-02-02 02:42:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Phone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mikeisfreejeze on
Thursday, 4th February 2010 @ 03:49:34 AM AEST (User
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may i suggest you unplug the phone? LOL
Nice poem, but i wouldnt worry so much about making the rhymes. They are basic rhymes. i just feel anyone can rhyme on a dime.
because its that time
that we all rhyme
we make these stories
all for others glories
is it a waste
Or does it have taste?
I think poems should have less of that, and more focus on the meaning, the depth , and the feeling of the poem....not the grade school rhymes.
Good poem though, i hate the phone
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