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Rain Rain Come Today
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 02:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Rain falls from up high;
Stains faces like tears,
Commits suicide on the pavement.
I watch it---
Fascinated by it’s dance.
Suddenly all becomes quiet:
The Sun has made his presence known.
He draws flocks of people locked inside outside,
To enjoy the warmth of his rays
To relish in his glow---
All but myself----
I remained by my window
Daring it to rain once more.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-02-01 14:21:27]
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Re: Rain Rain Come Today
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 10:35:30 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed the imagery from this poem. Reading this made me feel like magic was falling from the sky.
"Stains faces like tears,
Commits suicide on the pavement".
I really like that line. Well written
take care
duff
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