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kiss my adam's apple
Contributed by
full_blur
on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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oh my dear, your touch is so chilled
this hiss of your breath
the weight of your will
i cannot, i must not, partake of your desire
instead i caress your smooth body
of this i will never tire
but the lull in the whispers has troubled my heart
as you shine in the moonlight
i gather inertia, i guess i'll have to start
it has been a long time since i grinned here
but now my hands falter and release your shaft
your beautiful blade slicing ear to ear.
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2003-04-07 21:45:00]
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Re: kiss my adam's apple
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:28:10 PM AEST
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wow full_blur, by the title i thought it would be completely different and i liked the surprise. this was an excellent poem, so full of depth and then you get entangled within the words. Great job
Lindsey |
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Re: kiss my adam's apple
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:28:15 PM AEST
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| short but with a romantic Flare I really liked this one |
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Re: kiss my adam's apple
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:53:28 PM AEST
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| For people that don't have a lcue aobut suiside would think this poem is kinky until the last line but i loved it greatly.I've been there, still there, but I am still here! Nice joke in the beginning too! lol! |
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Re: kiss my adam's apple
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:59:48 PM AEST
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| Such depth in words. It's a wonderful poem along with its title. Well done my friend! |
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