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I Don't Like You
Contributed by
Rykor
on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 05:17:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I don't like you.
Words can't describe how beautiful you are.
I can't help but to stare from afar,
But I don't like you.
Your perfect voice makes me melt.
If only you knew how I felt,
But I don't like you.
I keep getting lost in your eyes.
I know I'm luckier than all the other guys,
But I don't like you.
I can't resist it when you hold me in your arms.
You lure me in with your hypnotizing charms,
But I don't like you.
Your lips are like a treasure to me.
Our wedding day, I must see,
But I don't like you,
I love you.
Copyright ©
Rykor
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2010-02-01 05:17:27]
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Re: I Don't Like You
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by myworld on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 05:43:58 AM AEST
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Aww ~ :D Makes me want to say this to someone.
Nice, I really thought it was about someone you don't like in a different context so I was still a bit confused until I got to the last line. haha.
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Re: I Don't Like You
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 06:34:24 AM AEST
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Very different with a twist, had me
guessing until the end.
Nice Write
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: I Don't Like You
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 03:18:19 PM AEST
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i like it... (nodding)
take care
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