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The Traveler
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 04:47:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Found Orbiting in Haze
Nightmares Flicker
In his glazed over gaze
Eyes White Empty Shell
Someone Please Release Him
From His Shackled Tormented Hell
Slack Jawed and Vacant
Fixed With a Wide Open Stare
And Now We Are Here
At Realities Outer Touch
The Ghost of Humanity
Residing in This One Man
We Found
Drifting
20 Trillion Light Years
From The Planet
That is Now Dust
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2010-02-01 04:47:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Traveler
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 07:51:35 AM AEST (User
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This is great. Each line created so much imagery in my mind that the visuals are wide open with possibilities. Thank you so much for sharing.
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