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Ride of a Lifetime
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 06:37:35 PM in AEST
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Ride of a Lifetime
I went today to the place where it all began
My heart felt empty as the tears just ran
Many have asked for the complete to see
Wanting to get the full picture of me
So into my mind you would like to probe
The thoughts continually flash as fast as a strobe
There are nooks and crannies that exist within my head
Where no one has been brave enough to dare tread
Thank you God for this incredible ride
The only regret is that behind my works I have to hide
It would have been great to stand publicly beside each one
But then perhaps your mission would not have been done
Thoughts that run the full spectrum of life
Happiness, sadness, love and strife
Dark corners filled with of thoughts of the macabre
When they run short on ideas, these areas they pillage and rob
Joyous thoughts that can carry you so high in the sky
You would think you were able to fly
Sad thoughts of death and despair
Many so bad I am not able to share
Thank you God for this incredible ride
The only regret is that behind my works I have to hide
It would have been great to stand publicly beside each one
But then perhaps your mission would not have been done
Today as I made my way to the top of the mountain’s peak
It has been ten years and still answers to the questions I still seek
Why Dear God have you placed your faith in me?
How am I to know if the words are reaching those who need to see?
So you want to take that journey inside my mind?
Just be prepared for whatever it is you may find
This journey has allowed me to walk with more Saints that I could ever tell
It has also taken me directly through the fiery streets of Satan’s Hell
Thank you God for this incredible ride
The only regret is that behind my works I have to hide
It would have been great to stand publicly beside each one
But then perhaps your mission would not have been done
Deadwriter
1/31/2010
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Re: Ride of a Lifetime
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 08:54:45 PM AEST
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After reading a previpus write with the same title I scratch my head and say, "hhuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmm ".
Great write.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Ride of a Lifetime
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 09:45:18 AM AEST
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WOW! my friend. This was truely amazing. And I cant tell you how many times I have been sitting alone thinking these exact things that you have so eloquently put into words. Thank you.
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Re: Ride of a Lifetime
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 05:14:40 PM AEST
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Wow, B...you are really outdoing yourself!!
This is awesome...it really had me thinking..
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