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Nobody's Child
Contributed by
myworld
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Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 05:05:29 AM in AEST
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drugabuse
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Petite the little bundle
Fragile as she seems
Diffused, eyes cynical
Gestures wary of the strangers
Her curled lips were distrusting
Avoiding intimacy
Body language averting
In her eyes a lamentation
Bruised were her stubby fingers
Aged through toil
Ancient far surpassed her years
She is nobody’s child
She grieves silently
Went unnoticeable
Too feeble to dispute
Nobody will comprehend
Flailing, she bleeds
Crying without a sound
Writhing, she pleads
No one ever paid concern
As a rose before the bloom
As if a seed, untended
A tree, dead before the life
She is nobody’s child
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2010-01-31 05:05:29]
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Re: Nobody's Child
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by spud on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 07:41:31 AM AEST
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Hi,
Beautiful - but heartbreaking.
Tommy
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Re: Nobody's Child
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 09:40:26 AM AEST
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We unfortunatly live in a world
which allows as well as condones
this very scenario
all her inner beauty
forsaken as if she doesn't exist
it's sad many have more contempt than
compassion towards her
your metaphors where so precise
and the depth in them sting
as often truth does
this passage was amirably brave
-D.Truth |
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