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She
Contributed by
sundayrider
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Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 12:33:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She
Rival the greatest of minds she does.
Revelling in her abilities she shuns.
Her nature is that of humble kindness.
She cares for all that is right, it is connate.
Prey however she is not, she is nobody’s means.
A quiet puissance not to be ignored she holds.
All of this, marries with her allure beyond beauty,
Leaving her graceful elegance as merely supervenient on Philippa.
She is Philippa.
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Re: She
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 06:09:18 PM AEST (User
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Nice flow, especially when you approached the ending. I can almost see this being read out load, with a face full of emotion.
I'm thinking that it was the repetition of Philippa and the last short line that make it so.
Nice work, and I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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