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Once
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 11:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Once, I fancied us kindred spirits;
Our souls originating from the same guff.
But I was mistaken---Wrong.
You are:
The setting sun,
An ember burning into ash,
The Autumn chill.
I am:
The falling star,
An eager spark bursting into flame,
The Summer heat.
We two:
Cannot keep the same rhythm,
Nor hum the same tunes,
Or speak the same language.
We belong separate
Apart
With many miles between us.
There is a you,
And there is a me,
But there can never be an us;
That once was and now isn’t ---
Even, in the afterlife we will not be friends
For we are much too different.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-01-29 23:52:57]
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Re: Once
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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Sad but also a very beautiful write.
Take care
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Re: Once
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by Daniellemarie on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 05:19:33 PM AEST
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very sad when friends drift apart but beautifully written
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