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Better Off

Contributed by jersey6123 on Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 03:49:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Excuse me as I walk through this thing called life at times things have been a little rough....I thought we were tight all you remember is how I fell down as others remember how I got up......Took ***** to another level and talked about what I put my family through...Im not proud of none of that but last I checked I’m accountable to him never you!!!! You said alot of ***** and never can be taken back...Truth be told as you said it I felt bad for you because I could see clearly empathy is what you lack....Yeah I went there things came out of my mouth I took some shots too...But at the end of the day my heart still tells me it isn’t all about me so I’ll still pray for you....Funny thing is where talking about my life things I had to Endure...While you sat back and watched mine you missed being involved in yours....Now that I have said that let me give you a jewel and please listen to what I have to say. Life is bigger then critizing others go look in the mirror and ask your self are you happy with the person you are today?????

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Re: Better Off (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 03:52:28 PM AEST
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Seems like you had a lot of pent up frustration that you just needed to get out.
Fortunately it came out as a crafted piece of frustration on a page........good for you.

Steve

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