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Finally Understand
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 10:17:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whisper to me the forest's lullaby
With a touch as soft as clouds in the sky
And I cannot resist, not even if I try
Your love is as sweet as cherry pie...
Well I think I finally understand
That you will try as hard as you can
What I've been lookin' for all alone
Is nowhere but here; I belong
When I breathe and close my eyes
I feel you here; you're by my side
Do you finally understand?
Love doesn't always go as planned...
Breathe to me all the things that you feel
Make the emotions tangible; make them real
I cannot reject the man you have become
Because you did it for me; I am numb
To the world...
Copyright ©
MoonlightKiss
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2010-01-29 10:17:50]
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Re: Finally Understand
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 11:09:28 AM AEST
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This is very good
This is so true..
well written. |
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Re: Finally Understand
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 03:37:18 PM AEST
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The opening line is one of those "reel them in" line's that compels you to read the whole piece.
It had a lovely soothing feel to it, better than any medicines !!
Nice work
Steve |
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Re: Finally Understand
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by hopelezz on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 09:13:45 PM AEST
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wow nice poem...
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