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Wasted excuse of a life
Contributed by
shsusmoker
on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 02:48:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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The back of my eyelids show memories of you,
of things you'd say and things you'd do.
I lie in bed prayin' you were here with me,
there's nothin' I can do to make you see.
The only place I find peace is in my dreams,
the only place my mind is free.
Life is torture longing for you,
what hell is life after losing you?
I couldn't try to steal you away
you seem to happy this way.
He's got you now, I wasted my life.
All that's left is pain and strife.
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shsusmoker
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2010-01-29 02:48:57]
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Re: Wasted excuse of a life
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 11:11:22 AM AEST
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Well Written.
So Sad... :(
I know how this is
because i have been hurt before.
love hurts.
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Re: Wasted excuse of a life
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by Obnoxious_Bread on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 12:51:51 AM AEST
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I like you're writing, it is very smooth to read.
I know how you must have felt when you wrote this... you're not the first broken heart or the last, but when this kind of crap happens it really does feel like the world just collapsed on top of you and you're helpless...
Thank you for sharing |
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