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SAD ETERNITY
Contributed by
BONEZ
on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 11:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I’m almost out of time,
Feeling caught up in a bind,
I can’t even move with all this ***** on my mind.
Where did I go wrong?
What could I have done?
I never for a second doubted that you were the one.
We were so happy,
Always without a care,
There never ever was a time that I wasn’t there.
This is so unfair,
I can still smell your hair,
I’ve got to do something cuz this pains too much to bear.
Weed doesn’t help,
And neither does the booze,
I could’ve sworn that I was winning; I never thought that I would lose.
Love must be for fools,
And I’m the biggest one,
I wanted to spend my life with you and for us to have a son.
More than one,
I wanted two,
But now there’s nothing I can do, were through.
So I must now go about my life,
Faking little smiles at people left and right,
And never again do I want to go through all this strife.
Never again will I want to make a girl my wife.
Because when you left you took all the love from my life.
Now I’m just a shell,
A body living in the hell,
Of lost opportunities unable to accel.
And this is how it will be,
A sad eternity,
Just waiting for the fateful day where I will never breathe.
Copyright ©
BONEZ
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2010-01-28 23:53:11]
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Re: SAD ETERNITY
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 05:54:27 AM AEST
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| good! some typos though! |
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Re: SAD ETERNITY
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 11:15:02 AM AEST
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wow so sad
I know how this is
because i have been hurt before
well written
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Re: SAD ETERNITY
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 01:19:10 PM AEST
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It never ceases to amaze me how love can
really screw us up, how ever strong
it makes us weak, it's like living in
a lost world, well written.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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