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The face I used to know
Contributed by
ClucyL
on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 08:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I was so young then
the way you played with my hair
the days i would see you and smile
suddenly, its all gone
so unexpected
so selfish
not fair to anyone
I miss you so much now
I think about what we would have been if you were here
I look around and i see familier faces that remined me of you
I miss the way you laughed
and your meladramatic sense of humor
and all I can do is remember you how you were
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ClucyL
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2010-01-28 20:47:56]
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Re: The face I used to know
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by Onslaught on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 04:30:16 AM AEST
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| A touching and truly painful write, I'm sorry hun for the lost love. I wish it never had to happen. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: The face I used to know
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 11:47:19 AM AEST
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Sad for your loss, the poem is very well written
Take care
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