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Loves seed
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 02:00:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears fall as dead petals cast in the wind
flower of love now wilts it's fate known
seed of love now lay in baron land blind
reach out nothing there that once sown
Last of me my time gone no longer shine
rain falls but dose not feed loves need
stem bends broken looks for once mine
last petal falls love now dies last seed
No longer now this love sown
love never again to be grown
Dew lays as tears on my leaves
for now as i lay no love breaths
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Fuzzy
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2010-01-28 14:00:10]
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Re: Loves seed
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 02:05:51 PM AEST
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| Beautiful melancholy write echoed in its imagery tears fall as dead petals cast in the wind |
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Re: Loves seed
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by JakerBaker88 on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 10:07:04 PM AEST
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| I just wanted to say that I thought this was a beautifully well written piece. I especially liked this phrase, "Dew lay as tears on my leaves for now as I lay no love breaths." |
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