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The Depths of Love
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 10:41:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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They say poetry should come from the heart
So that is exactly what I will do
I will express my love willingly
My undying love for you
You brighten all the colours in the world
And dull all the hurt and the pain
You make me smile when I'm upset
And in this crazy life, you keep me sane.
They say love means to torture yourself
Love will always hurt you in time
Then why to we all strive to find love
If the feeling is such a crime?
Perhaps the feeling is just good enough
That we do not care if it goes bad
Caught in the moment, you cannot say no
But eventually, it will be 'what you had'.
When I look deep into your eyes
I see my faith reflecting back
You are my savior in my time of need
When any confidence, I lack
This romance is perhaps unethical
But I wanted you to know
That I would give my life for you
Off the edge of the earth, I would go.
Everything feels wrong when you aren't here
You are like my second half
And everything feels right when I'm in your arms
You always make me laugh
I can tell that this emotion is utterly genuine
I hope I will never lose you
We have a relationship strong enough to endure
All the bad times, and the good too.
Copyright ©
MoonlightKiss
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2010-01-28 10:41:53]
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Re: The Depths of Love
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 11:43:46 AM AEST
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| A very honest and genuine look at love enjoyed reading this |
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Re: The Depths of Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 04:19:59 PM AEST
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I think so many things should come from the heart, especially how you truly feel about someone.
You've expressed that so well here, there is tremendous warmth in the things you have said.
Good luck in life's journey.
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