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LIVING EYES
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 02:10:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Eclipse Horizon
Cascading Feelings
Overwhelming Undermining
Self Destroy
Self Sabotage
The Warm Energy Cells
With Living Eyes
So Close
But Slips Through My Fingers
Whenever I Seek To Grasp
Their Levels Almost All Used Up
So Low
And We Just Don't Connect
The Children Have Played
With All The Toys
Used Every Last Drop
In Every Last Cell
I'm the Boy With No Hands
With No Toy Which To Play
Couldn't Play Even If I Had
All The Toys Are Now Broken
All The Cells Are Gone
All The Children Dead
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2010-01-28 02:10:40]
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Re: LIVING EYES
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 08:31:09 AM AEST
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This is morbid...which may be why it's so interesting. I love the darkness of it. Great job in creating a piece that isn't so cliche.
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Re: LIVING EYES
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 01:20:50 PM AEST
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This is so dark and I love it. Intricate and delicate at the same time. This was great.
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