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Untitled
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I will take you by the hand
I will be the one
I will love you like no other
I will accept all you have to give
I heard everything you said
I know what I mean to you
I even feel it in my heart
I feel like I'm dying when we're apart
I did like you said, I looked at the sky
Your right it is the color of love
Your love, Endless and Forever
But today its clouded and grey
I see the bridge you told me about
Even tho its dark and grey
The storm rolls in to keep you away
When the lightning strikes you're the only angel I see
My end is open for you to cross
I just hope you can make it to me..
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stonedraider23
... [
2003-04-06 23:45:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by Jaidin on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 02:25:12 AM AEST
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| Very good. I like it a lot, post another sometime! Good luck and keep up the good work! |
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Re: Untitled
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 07:31:49 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.... Nice poem!! Keep them coming.
Jenni |
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Re: Untitled
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by Sara on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 10:09:12 PM AEST
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Yes, Yes Welcome!! I for one definately can NOT WAIT to see more!!!!! This was awesome.. I liked it
<3 SAra |
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Re: Untitled
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:15:10 AM AEST
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| good write,loved it!!!! |
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