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I'm So Sorry
Contributed by
rainbowstar
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Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
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For the times, we've laughed and played
Together for many times, we've endured the pain
Forever now, we'll stay the same
But now that you're gone
How can this be the same?
For what is a friend, for what is a game?
I've played games with you too many times
Pretending that i knew nothing I left behind
But now I finally realized,
I'm so sorry for the times I've let you down
Left you all alone, with a frown
I'm sorry for letting go,
Without letting you know
I'm sorry for leaving you behind
Without a trace of time
I'm sorry I let you pass away
Without saying goodbye
I'm sorry I was never a good friend to you
Though I still remember the good times we had
Forever and ever, that shiny star
Will always symbolize the friendship of ours
By:L.Z
Copyright ©
rainbowstar
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2003-04-06 22:05:00]
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 10:42:42 PM AEST
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Sad, but very lovely...
Jenni |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 12:09:44 AM AEST
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Very good write! It's sad yet triumphant as I'm sure that shining star will shine briter at this work of art. Very good work!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by venkat on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 07:09:54 AM AEST
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| swad but agood write.. well written .. venkat |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 11:35:25 AM AEST
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well written but so sad. I hope you find everything you want and need in this life.
Michelle |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Sandra on
Tuesday, 8th April 2003 @ 01:54:00 AM AEST
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| This was a Great write! I feel the emotion in it and all the pain is visable. Wow |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Sk8er909 on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:28:28 PM AEST
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| Good write I really liked it |
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