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Leave me
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Sunday, 24th January 2010 @ 08:17:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Take in the air breath in dispare look
for comfort in the tears, as they flow
from insanity of love, cruel burden
now so strong, my heart beats in
my past as a shadow, now
look back see the man once
was me, torture my mind stake
my heart, love bleed out kill
this burden rip out hearts
pain, every drop bleed now
bleed forever flow free go
now bleed love leave me.
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Fuzzy
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2010-01-24 08:17:30]
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Re: Leave me
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by longhaircg on
Sunday, 24th January 2010 @ 07:19:23 PM AEST
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good writing, I feel the pain in your words as it is told of loves pain wishing it would go.
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Re: Leave me
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 24th January 2010 @ 11:12:29 PM AEST
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| Beautiful mournful write ,esp like look for comfort in tears as they flow from the insanity of love, bleeding the love. |
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