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Don't surrender
Contributed by
essential
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Friday, 22nd January 2010 @ 04:26:47 AM in AEST
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Maybe I'm not very wise
But you have to apologize
Because I want to give you some advice:
Everything has got its prize
The second a baby is born an old man dies
You will hear truth but much more lies
If you see someone who cries
and has tears in his eyes
Tell him that the world can also be nice
Because after a sunset is always a sunrise
If you comprehend this you will realize
That even if today is hell tomorrow can be paradise
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Re: Don't surrender
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by spud on
Friday, 22nd January 2010 @ 12:24:34 PM AEST
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Hi,
An uplifting piece of verse. You should put it under the topic 'inspirational.'
Well written.
Tommy
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Re: Don't surrender
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 22nd January 2010 @ 03:21:55 PM AEST
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nice! this a good positive note
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Don't surrender
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by purplestary on
Friday, 22nd January 2010 @ 11:16:51 PM AEST
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| this was a good write. thanks for posting it. I especialy liked the last two lines. they are great closers, and are so true. |
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Re: Don't surrender
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 04:37:38 PM AEST
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Perhaps not just a poem for desperate guys, perhaps also a poem for those seeking motivation or inspiration !!.
Nice work
Steve |
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