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Is It He?
Contributed by
dispatchedangel
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Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 09:31:44 AM in AEST
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Is it he that I see
So long the time has past
Yet it be he that I see
Rekindling my love at last
But why now has it come
Why now appear his face
Filling me with ecstasy
Remembering his grace
I must be mistaken
It must not be him
But the feelings I feel
Are there from within
I need to know for sure
Need see him once more
Hear his warm voice
That sends chills through my core
That will then be proof enough
To prove he is he that I see
Then my heart will ache again
But this time it’d be for me
So is it really he that I see
After all this time has past
It just has to be he that I see
Rekindling my love at last
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2010-01-21 09:31:44]
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Re: Is It He?
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by Prism on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 10:24:04 PM AEST
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Poems still need to use punctuation.
Dont believe me? Fine, read this respones to a question about punctuation in poetry.
http://www.verlakay.com/boards/index.php?topic=26280.0 |
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Re: Is It He?
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 22nd January 2010 @ 02:32:35 AM AEST
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Myself i think this is well written, nice write.
Take care
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