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Chocolate feelings
Contributed by
turab
on
Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 12:02:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I loved a chocolate
A chocolate i never got
It could only be asked for.
Not bought
I asked the chocolate to be mine
It said no!!
All my dreams were shattered
And my hopes started to get low
There came a candy
As another option
Without thinking, I took it
With hopes that it would help
In painful situations
The candy became mine
But things weren't just fine
I and my heart were in a serious debate
Because i still longed for my love my chocolate
I had taken the candy
And i had to be faithful to it
So i tried to forget the chocolate
But it was like skipping a heart beat
Chocolate
The word surrounding my mind
Seeming so simple
Yet divine
It was my mistake
My wrong decision
I had to stay with the candy
While my heart drowned in the
Chocolate's vision
Then came a day
I and the candy were no longer together
Everything was over
Now! i was able to think about
My chocolate
my chocolate only
And not be faulty
But, the chocolate liked some one else
Not me
she also had feelings that
I could not see
She was with him
Her gye
I was alone with one question
Why?
The person i longed for
Was gone
Everything was over
Pain was reborn
Surrounded by thoughts
Confusion in my head
There i stood alone
Waiting...
Waiting for my
Chocolate
Author: Turab Allani
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turab
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2010-01-19 12:02:28]
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Re: Chocolate feelings
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by fallensaint on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 07:39:47 AM AEST
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wow amazing write!!!!! I know how it feels....
It's painful but sometimes it all works out in the end.
I hope it works out for you |
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Re: Chocolate feelings
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 10:05:10 PM AEST
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