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Already Dead
Contributed by
fallensaint
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Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 10:41:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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We dance in the dark
And the distorted shadows
Our minds are over run
The pain grows and grows
So I give a toast
To what you have done
I'm glad your happy
I'm glad you had fun
So what if you killed me
I was already dead
I knew you never loved me
It was all in my head
It's honestly killing me
On the inside I'm dying
I need to give up
Just completely stop trying
But I know I can't
I've already tried
But what's the point
I've already died
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fallensaint
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2010-01-19 10:41:55]
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Re: Already Dead
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 06:12:58 PM AEST
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this is pretty good.. well conveyed.. it reminds me of what i wrote before.. I like the depth of this and the feeling..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Already Dead
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by b_lee on
Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 09:08:45 PM AEST
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it's nice and short and to the point. kinnda like a spear in the heart.
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Re: Already Dead
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 06:41:56 AM AEST
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| well written, it rang clear, of feelings that we the dead remember |
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Re: Already Dead
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by AshlenaAres on
Monday, 25th January 2010 @ 05:51:14 AM AEST
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I feel this soo much, being killer inside by someone you love/loved, the pain is boundless.
Great poem, well set out.x |
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