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~DAYS~
Contributed by
inkmaster
on
Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 05:40:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Days spent trapped insane,
Days that never ever undo,
Days that are left substance free,
Days left many unused.
Days that linger lost in a daze,
Days only spent for two.
Days that that are spent in haze.
Days of many being untrue!
Days longing with rage,
Days turning life s page,
Days spent in the darkened room.
Days looking for old flames,
Days left of the un new.
Days spent lodged in the past,
Days that are locked in my room.
Days of looking through the cracks,
Days spent listening to abuse.
Days that are extremely spent,
Days that lead me back to you…
~Inkmaster~ (C) 2010
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2010-01-19 05:40:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~DAYS~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Capian on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 05:03:16 AM AEST (User
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Nice write, my pick of best lines are "Days left many unused" and "Days looking for old flames". Nice finishing line as well, keep it up! |
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