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The Dark Side

Contributed by landsleyalexandre on Saturday, 16th January 2010 @ 06:05:24 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I was never ready so it took me and blindfolded me , it gave me the most beautiful creature on earth who planted a knife in my heart. A chill crawled up my spine , blood went down into my veins and jealousy crowded my judgment. I filled my heart with all the hate that surrounded me so I could use it against my enemies. I wasn't scared , just confused and troubled. They tried to help me by telling me how they understand the trouble that I was going through; "do you see that line between love and hate?" I ask they said "no" “can you feel the rage that is burning inside of me or can you hear my cries inside the bathroom during those lonely nights?” They again answered me "no" so I look at them and said " so how do you understand me?" Then, there came this sweet taste in my mouth , I couldn't quite describe it but I was starting to like it. A thought came to my mind, and quick I saw my enemies fell on the floor one by one. I looked in the mirror and there, was those blazing eyes looking right at me; the pain, I could see it, sweat cover my face, my whole body shook but I was peaceful from the inside. I never felt so lost in my entire life.

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Re: The Dark Side (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 07:37:14 AM AEST
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Very Interesting story type of flow.

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