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Levitation
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 04:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I hover just outside of time
In no man's land of grass
A place of deepest sanctuary
Where the clock's hands never pass
It kind of feels like falling
Only I am laying still
Could it be my destiny
Or deliverance of free will
Sensations of harmonium
To which it knows no bounds
A requiem of voices
Yet my ears hear not a sound
A peaceful place to meditate
Awash with purest light
My sense of self relinquished
To the magic door of night
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Re: Levitation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 04:59:37 PM AEST
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You're stoned.  Na, I'm just messin' with ya'. But it sort of does have that sixties feel to it...that incense and peppermints vibe. Guess that's what I like about it.
Nice job. It's peaceful here.
I also like that it made me feel nostalgic in a sense that it reminded me of a time when we tried to levitate this girl when I was back in high school. It actually worked for a bit. I think.
Take care.
Tim
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Re: Levitation
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 06:17:31 PM AEST
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Pretty...and very tranquile. Nicely written my friend.
- Bleedthelove. |
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Re: Levitation
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by northernlights on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 11:04:36 PM AEST
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| really created the feel of levitation with this and the peacefulness sends you into another world well written lisa xx |
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Re: Levitation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th January 2010 @ 03:47:12 AM AEST
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Out of body experience's are inducive
to step back out of the world and just watch it be
escaping the chaos the burden of man
even if only for a moment is exhilarating
rarely is it's grace depicted so finely
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Re: Levitation
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Saturday, 16th January 2010 @ 06:52:11 AM AEST
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| I digg:) |
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Re: Levitation
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by spud on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 07:32:52 AM AEST
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Hi,
I agree with Tim - it has a touch of 60's about it - 'psychedelic' and 'peace brother.'
Am I on the right wavelength with that??
A peaceful, carefree, and uplifting write!
Tommy
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Re: Levitation
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by Prophet on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 09:16:07 PM AEST
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| Dang... what I would do to feel like that. It sounds so good right now |
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