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In My Mind
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 02:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Pearly whites
flourecent shadows
gateways, portals
and mysterious doors,
new adventures
unseen paralells
and untouched shores
pirates, ogres
love stories
distant magical lands
the tide turns
beneath black sands,
Pearly blacks
haunting shadows
dead ends, cages
and trap doors,
repeated histories
dull universes
and still ocean floors,
police, criminals
heartbreaks
near-by reality' lands,
the tide turns
beneath the white sands...
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2010-01-15 14:52:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 03:23:08 PM AEST (User
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The imagery you've created with this is absolutely brilliant!!!
You're not wrong about the wondrous imagination!
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