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Trapped Beween Two Lovers
Contributed by
midian
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Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
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The two i love tear me apart,
They rip and tear till nothings there,
my heart is acheing i feel so numb,
the rain the pain, the mad and the sane,
they treat me like a little girl,
making my decisions for me,
they keep me caged up like a bird,
i love them both but which one more,
thier keys to my heart.. dont fit the door,
im sick of having to make choices,
someone always gets hurt..
but this time the little voices,
whisper "neither should you desert"
WHAT AM I MEANT TO DO?
im just a little girl,
Instead ov tearing me apart,
its pulling apart my world!
what should i do where should i turn?
i sick of it all maybe in hell ill burn,
the hatred the passion,
the suffering and abuse,
i dont want to be hurt anymore,
i dont want to be put through that misuse,
i feel so sick, like my hearts in my stomach,
this has to be stopped but choose........
I CAN'T !!!!!!!!!!!!1
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midian
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Re: Trapped Beween Two Lovers
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 07:57:02 AM AEST
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| i like this a lot...well done... |
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Re: Trapped Beween Two Lovers
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 11:43:12 AM AEST
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You expressed yourself well. Good luck to you!!
Michelle |
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Re: Trapped Beween Two Lovers
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:03:35 AM AEST
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Hi, Complicated! Good descriptive expressions!
As you say, 'abuse' is what that is. You should be kind but not let yourself be manipulated. The opportunity will come when you'll be able to choose something better for yourself. God be with you. Great-grandma Bizzy |
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