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No More Goodnight
Contributed by
CaBann
on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 01:45:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you say you're through
you push me away
I grab your hand
you're telling me no
you can't take the constant battle of confusion
it begins to rain...
you're walking away
I fall to my knees,
saying please
my tears becoming rain
my heart feeling like a thunderstorm
lighting in my soul
my hands wanting to hold you
and your legs just wanting to go
you close the door and never look back
the vibrations of the slam,
shatter my frame
and I'm left on my knees,
with the words of...
can I at least say goodnight
Copyright ©
CaBann
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2010-01-15 13:45:16]
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Re: No More Goodnight
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 03:33:02 PM AEST
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Wow, that last line really grabs you......
such an awful moment to experience, that moment where
the blow is so hard it winds you of air.
Very well written x
Star x x x |
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Re: No More Goodnight
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th January 2010 @ 05:41:54 AM AEST
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Very well put together. I could picture the
moment and feel the feelings portrayed.
Good write........Mike |
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