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~Seeds I've Sown~
Contributed by
sammi23
on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 10:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Shadows creeping dark and deep, swirl around me, try to keep
all my hopes and dreams without, to leave me empty and filled with doubt
I try to fight them, try to win, this great battle of mortal sin
but never knowing, never sure, of where I stand there seems no cure.
In my dreams I stand alone, aware of all the seeds I've sown
some so terrible it makes me sad, I can't make them right in the dreams I've had
Then slowly again the shadows creep, mocking and laughing, they won't let me be
I search for the light where I know I'll be safe, but these shadows come to steal it away.
Within my heart I know the truth, to find a way this I must do
to right the wrongs and try to heal, these wounded souls i know are real
My sins before me, I cannot see, the tears have fallen, how could this be?
to hurt another and cause them pain, I pray I don't go there again;
I stand and fight the shadows alone, because of all the seeds I've sown
and I pray someday that I will see, someone I've hurt who'll smile at me...
to know forgiveness and love's true worth, the greatest gift to have on earth.
Copyright ©
sammi23
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2010-01-14 22:31:42]
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Re: ~Seeds I've Sown~
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 05:18:40 AM AEST
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Hi,
A very readable rendition of guilt, regret, and
redemption. Who hasn't been there at least in
one of the categories?
Nice one!
Tommy
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Re: ~Seeds I've Sown~
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by inkmaster on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 10:28:55 AM AEST
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Deep,
like a confesion to a priest! I liked the flow of verse well written, and worthy of reading, not like so many others here! Write on,
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