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Flames Of Guilt
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 06:13:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A whiskey drinker,
A careless smoker,
A flame battler,
A smoke choker,
A frantic search,
A bucket of water,
A burning house,
A missing daughter,
A stiff young body,
A smoke filled room,
A scream of anguish,
A room of gloom,
A final cough,
A retired chest,
A family burn,
A man and his princess rest.
Copyright ©
theurbanpoet
... [
2010-01-14 18:13:28]
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Re: Flames Of Guilt
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 06:28:19 PM AEST
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This is oddly charming. It has a riddle like almost tragic fairytale feel to it. Great job.
- Bleedthelove |
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Re: Flames Of Guilt
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 11:44:38 PM AEST
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| I like this one right here, i could almost feel the sadness and depression manifest, deeper and deeper until it reached a tradgic end. Good write and keep it up:) |
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Re: Flames Of Guilt
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 07:44:22 PM AEST
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Everything seemed to fit very well while reading this. Between the imagery and the story being told, it's great.
Well written! |
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