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Scared
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 12th January 2010 @ 09:16:19 PM in AEST
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Wallowing in worry,
in a trance of dread,
hope is about to plummet off life's cliff;
my mind is trapped in its realm of dark thoughts.
Scared to death of losing you,
seeing life's fragile thread flirting with a dagger,
if only I could take the dagger's blow,
I hope the thread is strong enough to withstand
before your life is swallowed up in quicksand.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-01-12 21:16:19]
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Re: Scared
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 02:54:41 AM AEST
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tight and strong, with a mature caring for another - there needs to be more of that around.
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Re: Scared
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 06:33:33 AM AEST
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I can feel the anguish from within this piece. Powerful emotions from the caring.
Hope everything is well.
Deadwriter
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Re: Scared
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 10:10:08 AM AEST
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A resoundingly strong piece Heidi,
The desire for hope & peace is wonderfully cast here...... well done!
Lisa x x x
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Re: Scared
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by Keykey on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 04:23:49 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. I've been in this situation. There was one time when the thread wasn't strong enough. I hope it'll be strong enough for you. |
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