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Before It's Too Late
Contributed by
ThirtyDays
on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's as if you took
A love under construction
And turned it into
A game of destruction
When the time came
A time of dire need
You made it a joke
I felt my heart bleed
Since that time
Now five months or so
I've tried to heal
From that fatal blow
Every thing I saw
Every thing I read
Sent images of you
Tripping my head
So you can lump me,
In with the "jerks and losers"
But darling you've made
This beggar a chooser
The pain still lingers
Like an old curse
Today I thank God
It could have been worse
I gave you my heart
That was my fate
I'm glad you discarded
Before it's too late
Copyright ©
ThirtyDays
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2003-04-06 17:25:00]
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Re: Before It's Too Late
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by rainbowstar on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:39:26 PM AEST
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beautifully written..i like the way you wrote it ^^ good luck..keep writing
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Re: Before It's Too Late
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by Jilly on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:31:09 PM AEST
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God wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one so we will know how to be grateful.... Excellent write... You have captured emotions in this write that most are ashamed to share... i feel it...
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