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~You Walk Alone.~
Contributed by
sammi23
on
Monday, 11th January 2010 @ 08:18:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Oh heart that will not see, darkness spirals so needlessly
you walk alone, you walk so still, it bends against your mind and will
I've heard you cry out in the dark, please love find me, just a spark
and though I've heard you and I'm right here, you push me away though I'm quite near
My love I'd give my heart and soul, everything that you'ld be whole
the depth of the ocean, the mountains height, any length for your sweet plight
I want to hold you and draw you near, my heart speaks with you but you won't hear
alas I too am so alone, so dark and cold, as cold as stone
If you'ld look close I know you'ld see, a heart of love would set you free
but you won't look and you won't see; you'll throw away your destiny.
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2010-01-11 20:18:58]
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Re: ~You Walk Alone.~
(User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on
Tuesday, 12th January 2010 @ 10:25:49 AM AEST
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Well-written work. Your heartache is clearly shown through ur words
Its always tough to love someone so near who keep looking elsewhere for love
One of love's and life's many ironies
Just hope and pray and be strong...Keep believing ! |
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Re: ~You Walk Alone.~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 05:49:35 PM AEST
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| Very passionated sammie and it shows. This is something I just went through as I'm sure many have but it does get better. |
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