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Good-Bye
Contributed by
HannaSkittles
on
Sunday, 10th January 2010 @ 08:08:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Good-Bye, my precious self:
Who's body now dangles over over formidable brines,
And falls in shallow expance.
Good-Bye, My Poor Self:
Who's twine has only 1 thread left,
which gave way as I took
My
Last
Breath.
Good-Bye, my love,
For I shead bitter tears as I take my mortar,
and
Dispatch
Of
You.
My apparaitional, dead body,
Drifts over the brine,
Yields the rope,
Clasps
The
Weapon.
Copyright ©
HannaSkittles
... [
2010-01-10 08:08:51]
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Re: Good-Bye
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Sunday, 10th January 2010 @ 10:41:25 AM AEST
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Hi Hanna
It's a good write and belies your age with its
maturity. Well done!
Hope you don't feel as dark as your poem??
Power to your pen!
Tommy
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Re: Good-Bye
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 10th January 2010 @ 12:07:07 PM AEST
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yes it is a very good write, keep writing
Take care
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