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Sail Boat
Contributed by
solace_atlast
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Saturday, 9th January 2010 @ 10:53:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I was a sail boat,
masts open, I took to the sea.
Floating, living, breathing, existing,
until you came and brought a change to me.
You were an anchor.
As hard as I tried to float on,
you were constantly there
dragging me down.
I lost all control;
no longer was I floating for myself,
but sinking for you.
Down and down I was pulled,
unable to escape-
Until I cut that anchor,
and put you back into place.
With you gone, a weight had lifted,
and I was once again free.
I am a sail boat.
Floating, living, breathing, existing.
Masts open, taking on the sea.
Copyright ©
solace_atlast
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2010-01-09 22:53:37]
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Re: Sail Boat
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Sunday, 10th January 2010 @ 10:52:04 AM AEST
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Hi,
This is a little gem of a poem. Perhaps you should
use your pen-name as its title? Seems fitting.
Tommy
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Re: Sail Boat
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 10th January 2010 @ 12:13:14 PM AEST
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What a great poem, i enjoyed reading this.
Take care
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