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its not the world that i want to see......
Contributed by
praz
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Saturday, 9th January 2010 @ 06:10:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i had seen so many young man fighting,
i had heard young child crying,
i had seen old man bleeding in the streets,
but why this happening in the world,
how many days we have passed on the earth,
but still don't know how to live,
and now the peace will flow in the wind,
and my song will starts to flow with the wind,
how many times you have helped others,
when you saw they are helpless,
then what you answered to your self respect,
when you saw others was doing this,
how many times you had closed your eyes,
when you saw someone was doing crime,
its not the world that i want to see,
its not the world that i think before,
after how many death man will understand,
why he is here in the world,
every day the sun will rise for you,
not for the light but for the hope,
only you have to believe on yourself,
when you got deflected from your way,
all i imagined the world is like that,
i want to hear children laughter everywhere,
and the birds flying all around,
i want to see mother loving her child,
and wiping the tears from his eyes,
i want to feel joyfulness in the air,
when people celebrates n the eve,
this is the world that i want to see,
this is the world in which i want to live,
and now the peace is flowing in the wind,
and my song will start to flow with the wind.
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2010-01-09 06:10:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: its not the world that i want to see......
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Sunday, 10th January 2010 @ 05:04:15 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
I would guess that English is not your first
language - apologies if I'm wrong - yet you've
tackled the essence of your poem with great
sadness, observation, and hope.
''How many days have we passed on this
earth, but still don't know how to live.''
A brilliant statement, and I'm with you 100pct
on it!
Well done!
Tommy
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