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Madness Or Faithfulness

Contributed by MuhammadShanazar on Friday, 8th January 2010 @ 07:41:34 AM in AEST
Topic: war

Every evening in front the mirror,
She sits to adorn herself
With faith and light of hope in the eyes.
A strange happiness spreads over her face,
She combs, braids her hair in the latest fashion,
Powders her face and neck, applies Kajal to the eyes,
Pastes a thin layer of lipstick with faint rosy colour,
Then her sober beauty begins to shine.

She often stands engrossed in the open door,
And listens to the footsteps of each passer-by,
Looking into the vacancy she waits for her husband
Who went long ago in the second eve of the wedding
To defend boundaries of the country,
And laid down his life with all colourful hopes.

It is madness or too faithfulness,
She has cherished a belief that he will return,
That is why she reiterates, rehearses the same activity,
And every evening adorns herself
Waits long, and goes to the bed with a new burn,
But her parted, lost companion doesn’t return.

Copyright © MuhammadShanazar ... [ 2010-01-08 07:41:34]
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Re: Madness Or Faithfulness (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Friday, 8th January 2010 @ 09:04:32 PM AEST
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This was pretty good. I genuinely saw and can relate to how she may have felt. It's so sweet, and so sad really.

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