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Souless Flight

Contributed by odessa19 on Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 10:39:42 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

To search for one that is lost yields a panorama of disappointed faces
All scratching at an unscathed surface, self destructing from within

A gift that glimpses into the shattered, I have seen them
They are unreachable

Never anticipate a steady line
Their lives are an internal war

The warring factions struggle to keep the divide wide enough to engulf all passion and hope.
They don't seek conviction but mere completion and utter elimination.

Chaos. Non-existence.
You cannot reach a soul.

The war wages on and the casualties are endless.
Yet, the beast shall never be satisfied until the whole world burns!

Smearing all sense of existence across the face of God
Like birthday cake, waiting for the wish from a candle
It seems all is lost...

Suddenly the empty fire gives way to light
Instead of feeling pain, they see something - Vision.
Chance, possibility, a glimmer of hope

Small at first, it tugs at many - even proclaimed disbelievers.
Alas, it is the essence of their disbelieve that leads them to salvation.

"How could this be it"? ---- "It's Not"

Copyright © odessa19 ... [ 2010-01-07 22:39:42]
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Re: Souless Flight (User Rating: 1 )
by sammi23 on Friday, 8th January 2010 @ 05:37:09 PM AEST
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you know, at first i thought it was going in a particular direction; then suddenly for me it wasn't. this was good, i liked it. but then again, i love the little twists in life; it just makes things so much more interesting. keep writing.

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