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Reality Of Love

Contributed by The_Phantom on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Emotions explode, love unfolds,
Lake of fire, ignites my desire,
To love someone true, is to love you,
Moon's shimering light, dragons take flight,

On the wings of love, your all I can think of,
Lonely and fading, heartbroke and waiting,
For you to return, my body yurns,
Cries in the night, pain I can't fight,

Sealed in a tomb, I'm waiting for you,
Shooting stars, memories of painful scars,
Love in your eyes, was it all a lie,
River of tears, I surcome to my fears,

Giving in, to the comfort of sin,
Blinded by love, I release my own blood,
Lay on a bed of nails, let my body be impaled,
Free me of this pain, call me insane,

My heart is gone, where ever you are, is where I belong,
You left me for dead, or is it all in my head,
A tombstone engraved, " The Phantom", that's my name,
Put me to rest, I'll scream your name with my last breathe.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2003-04-06 13:05:00]
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Re: Reality Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:11:29 PM AEST
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Loved your poem very insightful. Nicely written.


Re: Reality Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 02:01:14 PM AEST
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Phantom You put these in to beautiful words,
So touching as well! Good peice! Christina
Peace to the troops!


Re: Reality Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:37:54 PM AEST
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This is great Babe! I too am waitng in a tomb for your return.


Re: Reality Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 11:54:21 AM AEST
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This is lovely!! Well done.
Michelle


Re: Reality Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 03:06:19 AM AEST
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Even though this looks darker.. there is great reality.ie the strong yearning of heart.. great anguish of love for which the heart breakes with death cries.. great write... venkat


Re: Reality Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 11:26:36 PM AEST
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your love and devotion is sooo touching and moving, i love this last line it says volumes
"Put me to rest, I'll scream your name with my last breathe." hugs nessa


Re: Reality Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:22:43 PM AEST
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wow, this is such an insightful poem, i love especially the last two lines, you are something special and have great talent, don't ever let it go to waste! Luv ya lotz-Lisa




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