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oblivion
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 02:43:23 AM in AEST
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~ oblivion~
Remember you well my old friend
now time for you again no need
to seek me out i have felt your
breath of late beckon me back
~ oblivion~
you can be my lover take
me back let me forget love
past now let me dwell with
you once again my friend
will be no need to beckon
me for already i am there
~ oblivion~
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Fuzzy
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2010-01-07 02:43:23]
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Re: oblivion
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 03:22:53 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write, can feel sadness and despair and inevitability... I have felt your breath of late beckon me back. |
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Re: oblivion
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by longhaircg on
Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 05:35:55 AM AEST
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Quote: no need to beckon me Im already there, I like your expression of memories
loves past yet present
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Re: oblivion
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by zedwards on
Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 09:54:22 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, short and sweet and to the point |
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