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Sunny Day with Rain
Contributed by
jecox
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Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 12:27:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The clouds come but
They do not hide,
The sun away
From our sight.
The rain keeps coming.
Please don't stop.
Forever falling,
Forever to drop.
The light shines through
The mist of the day.
It won't end tomorrow,
Forever to stay.
Droplets hit the ground.
Soothing sound it makes.
Blue, as the sky is,
Rain, it still creates.
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jecox
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2010-01-06 00:27:24]
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Re: Sunny Day with Rain
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 12:41:48 AM AEST
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Keep writing. Don't worry what others think Just paint your feelings with words.
good work.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
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Re: Sunny Day with Rain
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 03:47:09 AM AEST
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yes keep writing please, this is well written in my opinion.
Take care
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Re: Sunny Day with Rain
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 06:53:43 AM AEST
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I love the metaphor!
Listening to the rain is hypnotic.... it reminds me all things precious it quenches beneath it...
Very nicely written x
Star x x x
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