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just ask

Contributed by levi_kellogg on Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 01:00:24 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

You spend your life,
knowing i can ask later,
no fear comes to mind,
and no need for a prayer,
he is my god and he'll always want thee,
he tells me right out that he loves me,

You live your hole life full of hate and dispair,
you reach 90 and still not one single prayer,
suddenly death comes, you meet face to face,
u ask him for help and to dwell in his place.

His voice comes at a whisper as if tears have been cried,
i love you my child and for you my love is wide,
and i would never want to let you go,
but you didnt accept me so just know,
i would of accepted any meaningfull prayer,
but you never talked to me and i was always there,
i am a god of my word as those who believe in me know,
so when you rejected me you chose to go,

As two men behind me pulled me away,
i asked for forgiveness but my sight went grey,
now dwelling in hell i spend my life forevermore,
my wondering about god exists no more.

Copyright © levi_kellogg ... [ 2010-01-05 13:00:24]
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Re: just ask (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 04:56:58 PM AEST
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nice

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