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Pleasure, closure, trust
Contributed by
SmoothJoy
on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 07:30:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Listening to the heart beat exposes the beauty of fresh soul
It's language is simple, the voice is gentle, it sets goals
Numerous desires pile up in the chest, they begin to expand
With priority higher than selfish Ego, expansion spreads from East to West
Realization bursts outwards purifying restless conflicts within the mind
And then you know... you see it in front of yourself... its Love...soft and kind
Combination of Pleasure, Closure and Trust
They flow frame by frame lightning fast...
You are in love.....
SmoothJoy
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SmoothJoy
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2010-01-04 19:30:36]
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Re: Pleasure, closure, trust
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 07:41:56 PM AEST
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Very nice. I like hearing different perspectives of love.
Just an observation: You have your usage of it's/its mixed up. 
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Pleasure, closure, trust
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by SmoothJoy on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 07:43:52 PM AEST
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| haha thank you for reading the poem and your observation :) have a good day! |
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