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Better
Contributed by
karinagutierrez121
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Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 11:49:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You make me sweat.
I'll try my best to be better than all the the rest,
if i'm not it's all i've got.I've tried my hardest,so I guess it's
not a lot.It hurts me to think this love isnt real.
I love when you say you love me a lot,it make me smile,
but now i'm caught cuz in my heart youre already gone.
I remeber when we first met,I couldnt find the time to breathe.
I was amazed by everything you said.And in an instant you became
my everything.We'd talk everyday and tell eachother how much we missed
the sun.It's been raining all month.While you were at home,I'd just sit around writing you poems,
about how I felt.But you always thought I wasnt for real.So you went your way,and i went mine.
Youve gone away,and youre all i think about..everyday.My heart is damaged and im close to death.
And now you tell me you want me back? what am I to do? You were never mine so what would make this time new
i'll always feel the same,with or without you.
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2010-01-03 11:49:07]
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Re: Better
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by musicrox13 on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:33:02 PM AEST
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| loved it(: keep writing your really good at it(: |
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Re: Better
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:42:17 PM AEST
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I do feel the dilemma, and remember it well.
I believe, that the strong of heart, will always find the solution,
& this is definately of strong heart.
One is not made of paper or string, but of mind and being...
and these are very powerful tools. Use them well, & nothing can stop you from the impossible x
You are so clever, and I know you don't doubt it, x
Star x x x |
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