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stupid girl
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 11:45:22 AM in AEST
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there are movements between the silence
paper shuffled, cobwebs whispering shadows
to the light
dangerous scribbling & female breath
hard. . . uuhhhh, smudge
erasing. . . tap. . . tap. . .
tap. . .
there is no standing pose, lackadaisy
just female canvas, inked
casually inked
into an embrace,
sleepwalking. . . conceptualizing joy
& evolution into 10,000 words or less
a morning spent staring out at empty birdhouses
the breath of winter at the door
with no point of imagination
quite empty, & silent
myself. . .
unfortunate thing. . . butterfly precipise. . .
like a girl in a gallery
dumbstruck by beauty. . . just out of reach
silver morpheus. . . morning butterfly. . .
ssshhhhhh. . . shh. . . shh. . .
I'm working, here
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-01-03 11:45:22]
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Re: stupid girl
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 12:19:59 PM AEST
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I am willing to bet, we have all had these days but you have expressed it with the unique excellence of you. I enjoyed this immensely!!!!! Even though the "girl" is not stupid at all. |
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Re: stupid girl
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 01:47:17 PM AEST
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Hi Elle! Happy New Year poppet!!! x
I have to agree with Tim here. I can see your inspiration, and very tastefully put it was x
Precipise will settle, and metamorphasis will arise from slumber, everything does... It has to.
I felt this too, but remember, patience is a virtue, & I know you have it! '-)
luv Lisa x x x |
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Re: stupid girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 08:06:45 PM AEST
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Hi,
This was great to read and how you put it together I thought was very creative! |
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Re: stupid girl
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by poetrygal9 on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 05:05:50 PM AEST
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wow. that was a beautiful poem. capturing thoughts, movements, and scenes of the outside world perfectly. A job that deserves a round of applause.
Chiru K.
P.S. Not in any way is the girl stupid.
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