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a sad poem. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 10:03:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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missing the elegance of an impossible love
the rain princess, like a fallen angel,
succumbs to self-illumination
(the halo quakes)
heaven is torn
& though attaining a structure of simplicity,
& freedom from the wind
she could no longer taste creation
after the rain. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-01-03 10:03:05]
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Re: a sad poem. . .
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 10:13:44 AM AEST
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Yes, a very sad poem indeed. I can imagine the emotion that inspired such words and I am intimately familiar with them. The last two lines I believe to be the saddest in this piece. To not anticipate or even imagine the newness the rain drenches everything in, is completely pain-filled. Almost hopeless, even. Very well written, elle.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: a sad poem. . .
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by theunknown on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 11:49:49 AM AEST
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i agree with selene this is a very well written poem
and very well spoken |
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